All Comments on 'W & Little D Ch. 06'

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Devilboby almost 2 years ago

Too violent for my taste I just hope all these evil people get their just deserts in the last chapter.

Anonymousalmost 2 years ago

Looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks for writing.

Anonymousalmost 2 years ago

I love your writing style, it screams talent buuut I’m definitely not a fan of this kind of torture porn. It’s very clearly non erotic, it’s a little bit like the “car crash effect” you know it’s fucking awful but human nature demands that you look anyway even if it’s just to remind yourself that you’re alive. For me personally the big bonus of this story is looking forward to seeing the monsters get exactly what they deserve. Death is too quick for some people.

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...

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