All Comments on 'Wage Slave'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Well written

This is a well written, realistic scenario. Great effort and I look forward to many more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
You really missed a golden opportunity here

Since you are describing how you were cleaning her SHIT HOLE with your tongue you should have described the flavor and how good it tasted. Maybe you would gain some converts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hot, Well Written

Pretty hot story, and well written. Though don't know how realistic it is. Doesn't sound like much of a marriage.

AssObsessedAssObsessedabout 16 years ago
Good stuff

Just loved it. And who says it isn't realistic? It sure is...yeah it ain't much of a marriage, but that's what makes the story fun. Great work.

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