All Comments on 'Wagon Train Payment'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Well done bit of fiction

The work holds lots of promise for future efforts. You shouldn't dive into the sex without working on the beginnings but the powers of the mutant were excellent. Spend a little more time on the woman and sex next time.

lilywhite31lilywhite31over 17 years ago
Very enjoyable

I hope there is another installment ... I'd like to know how exactly he'd make her heel ...

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Reads nice. But the magician remains a mystery …. As does this magic universe ….

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