All Comments on 'Waiting'

by takemetieme

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Not a bad sex scene

But there's no character development and no plot. Who are these people? Why are they doing what they do? Etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good Job ;)

wow that was great! and i loved the ending too, was perfect :D

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