by LunaSolara
...that you promised to write more but didn't.
Your first story was incredibly hot!
Thank you for your very kind comments; I do plan on writing more stories surrounding Jack and Nina, once all of this holiday craziness settles down.
Great frist story and as anon says, potential for a story. So, chuck in your day job, drink loadsa coffee and get writing - your public awaits....!
I really enjoyed reading this. Good job!
What I was thinking though, throughout the story as I was reading it, was that I would love to know how they came to be together. You give lots of pointers in the back story: She's a DA, he's a homicide cop and they'd come together for some reason; it's both their second marriage (what's going on there?) ; there's a little bit of a dom/sub 'lite' ;) action going on there...
There's so much that you could base another story, or more actually a series, on if you were up for it. I would definitely be up for reading it! So much potential there!
Keep writing, I think this is great. x