All Comments on 'Wake Me Up'

your writing is very detailed and your grammar is great. keep going i'd love to see where this is going

Keep going. Love the plot. I can see this is a good build up to a great story. I get the feeling the business meeting he has on Monday will be something to do with Wes.

Just be careful of the ‘their’. It should be ‘there’ if you remember that ‘their’ is belonging to someone or someone. ‘Their shoes’. Whilst there is a place, ‘over there’

Lots of silly minor errors, you should either reread more thoroughly or get a proof reader/editor. Despite this I loved it