All Comments on 'Wake Up Service'

Great story.. I really like the hotel type adventures

I really like this story. The set up and execution were great. I look forward to reading about Emma and her travels

Dear Author,

You've done it again, won me over from the start. Emma sure gets into some compromising predicament. What a character you've created in her. There's plenty of room in your mind, I'm sure, to craft many additional chapters or stories.

Keep writing girl. You've got great promise.

Fondly,

Tomgirl (Tommi)

Surprise - hotels can be fun - well written with a flair!

I love it. I have had similar experience. I hope you will let me tell you about my times as cocksucker slave for Master Jim

Excellent. Your stories work so well for me.

very hot !

Damn. Hot and funny. Loved it.

Spelling & grammatical errors seem to be your MO (Modus Operandi).

PLEASE take more care in the finer nuances of writing. Your stories are very good . . .

BUT the syntax, spelling & grammar errors diminish their quality.

Get a proofreader, or an editor. Really not good. Week on the character development. And ignoring the STDs floating around is just plain criminal negligence on the part of any author.