All Comments on 'Waking up Auntie Ch. 02'

Put some actula effort into this

please continue with this story

Story not bad. Your spelling and grammar needs a lot of help. Sentences are badly constructed with missing words and morning is not spelled mourning . . . that's for dead people : )

Bernie

the idea is good but needs some action in

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Thanks.