All Comments on 'Walk of Shame Ch. 01'

Excellent characters and I can't wait to see more. Hope Jacki hears from Chris again.

Wish I'd written this!

Dreamer

You set up your stoies better than most writers that I have read. You shade and contrast your images so well - that just like Jaqueline being lulled and lured into her conversation with Chris - I just couldn't stop scrolling through your story. Each paragraph just ebbing and flowing a bit farther to a climax. Glad to see that there are already additional chapters to this tale and I'll finish up yet another great story from Stardog Champion!