by YoursSINSerely
....a sow's ear.Missing some character development but intriguing.pistolpackinpete
i'll definitely think twice the next time i see my neighbors out for a walk... our front blinds are never closed. :) it was a little sad at first, but it wrapped up nicely. best of luck in the contest!
Thank you for finding my gross error in character names! I've submitted this story for an edit and it should be all set after that. Proofread. Proofread. Proofread. And, since I'm in here thanking you for finding my error, I might as well pat myself on the back with a wonderful score, too.
but it seemed to have a lot of verbiage and not say much. I find it hard to believe you can see that much detail at that distance.
This was a good story although I didn't find it that hot and sexy. Probably because I don't like stories in this category but thank you for sharing.
IMHO - The story was light and very enjoyable. I’m happy to give you a five, based on the story and not on how large of a wet spot I got.
Best to you, Old_Blue
OH yes another real good read ! Babs I love reading your stories, the way you write'em I almost feel I am there in the bush, NO not that bush! the one in the front yard!
Wishing you the best of luck is the
Shoeslayer
I see that you submitted this story a few years ago. It reminded me of when I was a young teenager growing up in a small town in Maine. I used to walk around my neighborhood checking out windows! I never saw anything exciting, of course, but I remember thinking with my horny mind that maybe there was sex going on in at least some of the houses. Thank you for your story; I liked it. Rick now living in Florida, retired and happy.