by sadbluekid
It was an interesting story, though I think it would have been placed in erotic stories not romance. Romance to me is a one on one or a monogamous relationship. Group sex has never appealed to me even when I was younger, I'm 78 now. I guess I consider sex a very intimate thing between two people and the thought of others being present and watching is a bit disconcerting. Those are my thoughts and your writing was good but I kept looking for something else between them, some real connection other than sex. Thank you for the story, and to your editor also.