All Comments on 'Walking to Work Ch. 01'

by kimbelina

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
That's a pretty hot one

but you made a fun story out of it too. Good stuff. Thanks...Mancelt.

BillShakespeareBillShakespearealmost 14 years ago
Enjoyed

Nice story - enjoyed it a lot. Thanks.....

tellstory2jaketellstory2jakealmost 14 years ago
Fantastic!

The thought of being right around the corner from 'rush hour traffic' is so hot. Great story.. excellent detail.

Waiting for the next chapter,

Jake

la_belladonnala_belladonnaalmost 14 years ago
Great story

Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope there's more..

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I saw you walking!

Great story! Keepup the good writing!!

Anonymous
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