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wrong twist...

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I had huge expectations but the end ruined it. Still, you have it. Could we expect an alternative story based on this setting?

Thank you very much for your feedback. I welcome all comments. I try and keep the rape stuff to a minimum. This is an ongoing series and I don't want to write anything that alters my female lead too much. I try to write it so the reader's imagination goes to that place but I can feel it back at the end. Also I am shaping my cousin Raphael character into a more sympathetic ambiguous role for the future. If it was something that interested you, it would be ok to write an alteverse endings if you wanted to. Just credit the source material when you post.

Just leave the site and apologise to the grownups for stealing their computer.

Most authors appreciate and value feedback we get from our readers. I do enjoy interacting with the readers. I'm sorry that you felt the work lacking.