All Comments on 'War Zone'

by BadPenny1981

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
It was a good start

But you missed the anal, DP and triple pen. And she should enjoy it quite so much,

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ummm....

Maybe the author didin't want anal? but I really liked your story good job : )

badmolly18fbadmolly18fover 11 years ago
if I'm in a war...

If I ever get cought up in a war, it might as well happen like that. Seemed pretty real to - u cant really stop ur body from responding when something like that is happening anyway, especially when it is something u fatasize about and secretly kinda want to happen.

cowbullscowbullsover 11 years ago
close but not all

I enjoyed the story but I would have had the last guy take her ass.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Refreshing

I liked this. The "gentleman rapist" is a nice twist on an overplayed storyline. You've made the reluctance refreshing with this. Thank you and I hope to read more of your work. Kudos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow

Very sensual and sexy- - Men should know that giving pleasure to a woman makes him more of a man and is the only way to truly dominate.

josephstevensjosephstevensover 7 years ago
Excellent..

Very well presented and erotic story...thank you!

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