All Comments on 'Warming Up'

by Otzchiim

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Oh, well done!

The second of your contributions that I have read leaves me full of admiration. Again, I applaud the technique of "slowly, slowly, catchee ladee". The highly erotic nature of the mundane actions which precede intimacy come across with great impact. And the ending is, as previously, well contrived and realistic - no-one is hurt, no-one is taken advantage of, and the happy ending is for all.

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