All Comments on 'Warriors Adventure: The Lithes'

Well that gives a whole knew meaning to the saying eat me lol. But the story was hot up until they we're eating him.

Get one. Inconsistent tenses, among other things, kept me from enjoying this. Either English is your second language (which would temper my ire at the grammar problems), or you're well under 18 and haven't passed grade 10 English.

Should put in character descriptions