All Comments on 'Warrior's Way Ch. 02'

Great characters. Cant wait for more. :D

Please write more!!! Im aching to know what happens next!!!

This story shows great promise. I want more. Please continue.

It's a well-written story. Grips me. Update please.

Lovely story so far, I've read two chapters and I'm hooked. Please post more chapters soon.

...when will the next chapter be submitted??

Don't stop now! I can't wait to see you how you develop Ariel's feelings.

I like how much background info you put into the 2 chapters you've done and the way you are developing the characters along with the world. I hope you plan on writing more.