All Comments on 'Was It Ever True?'

This newspaper-style article was completely uninteresting. There was no emotional content at all, the dialogue was stiff and formal, the story line was on the other side of plausibility, and the action was dull and boring.

Definately not a stroke story, but I liked it.

Characters were handled well, and situation progressed at a good pace.

I think you handled the 'wimp' husband angle well, and I liked the revenge theme.

I appreciate the way you carried the story out to a fitting conclusion.

Thanks for the nice read.

A great story with decent characters and a nice justified ending. Well done.

the better stories on this site.If I had been the guy I would have acted after the reunion,But then perhaps he wouldn't have had time to make the financial "adjustments" that he eventually did. Your stories are well written and always interesting.

I can imagine the kind of work you put into it. The poster immediately below has no concept but to ficht with bare nuckles. As a pretty small guy I have learned to be devious to get more than just messing up a guy's face. I can appreciate what the hubby did,

Great Story, with a happy no-wimps ending. I was a little dismayed he stayed with her as long as he did. It seemed he would be a wimp to the end, but brains over brawn won the day.

Let me see If I have this right

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1 the super wimp Husband KNOWS beyond all doubt that Bev <b>LIED to him</b> about Buster coming to the reunion

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2 He KNOWS beyond all doubt that her intention was to FUCK Buster

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3 He KNOWS beyond all doubt that BEV was going out of her way to bad mouth Him....ridicule him

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4 the SUPER wimp husband gets beaten up

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5 The super Wimp husband gets tied down to a chair then FORCED to watch BEV get fucked WILLINGLY... this is serious felony.

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6 Super wimp Husband gets attacked SEXUALLY and is publicly humilated By his wife and her friends

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7 Super wimp husband almost gets beaten to DEATH !!-- and if he was dying BEV would of still been laughing at him.

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<b>THEN he decides to take her back ?!</b>

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and some readers think this is a Good story?... about as Good as the Bush's certainty regarding those WMDs

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Oh My God what a fucking warped sad totally laugable pathetic super wimp lovers story this is. This is as bad a HILDY... TIES THAT BIND or MARGO

What goes around comes around.

Bev hoisted herself on her own pitard and deserved every bit of the retribrution. No sympathy for her.

The best part was the last where Glenda came back into his life.

Your story was well written and developed.

Our hero was a timid man who believed that people could change. The reality bit him in the ass and he responded as best he could as any real man would.<P>

The conclusion reached is that no one should accept less than what they deserve regardless of how they look or the way they act or who their friends are. Turning the other cheek is a one time exercise for people who may not believe that they deserve any more than what is given or done to them.<P>

The right thing is always fair in most eyes and to accept less is a self imposed penalty that no one deserves.<P>

Nice work Author - you continue to grow in a territory that many's emotions cannot be controlled [ ie harry] But then he is perfect in every way from his special viewpoint atop his garbage dump. So discard his comments as irrational and poorly spelled.<P>

Thanks Again - More consequence is hoped for in the future.

With High Regard

The writer isn't a genius storyteller waiting for fame but the bad comments are entirely wrong. It was no effort to read and the end was satisfying.

I must agree with Harry. The end would have come IMMEDIATELY after the reunion if I had written the story. You want to know why? Because I was cucked after a woman, to whom I was engaged, met her former high school sweetheart (now a Doctor) at a high school reunion and spent two nights in the car on a dirt road with him screwing her brains out. I took her back but never again trusted her because things were never the same, and she proved me right. She eventually started chasing a banker in the small Iowa town where she lived and we separated. She went on to become the wife of a guy who is a bank president in South Dakota. She finally married the prestige and power she was looking for, but she had to sleep around until she found what she wanted.

About the rest of the story ... the author resolved the situation very well. I have a few questions as to why he did some other things but they aren't that damaging to the story, so I won't bother. Thanks for an appropriate ending.

and a story with characters you dont like. The author went out of his way to tell us the lead character was still carrying some baggage from his outcast nerd days. Even the character himself specifically says that his success hadnt erased the effects of his high school days. <p><p>

The story was about an outsider who made good and was taken advantage of by one the beautiful people. Might be disconcerting but its hardly inept or unbelievable. Some of you need to think about what the author wrote when writing a comment and not just about what you wish the author had wrote. 'I would never act like this so the story must be bad' is poor grounds for criticism imo. If the author had said the main character was well adjusted, confident and successful and then had him take the wife back after the reunion, you could bitch about the plot not making sense. He (author) didnt do that though. <p><p>

Anyway, I thought the story was ok. I do think you carried the husbands obtuseness to an excessive level. If you had skipped the physical assault, it would have been better imo. I also thought the wife was more unbelievable than the husband. You exaggerated the ex jock's clownishness to such a degree that I found it difficult to believe she would be so hung up on him. You could have emphasized her issues as well (i.e. older parents, different from most of her peers in grade school, becomes one of the in crowd by using her body, etc) so her motivations were more believable than just liking nasty sex. If she was just a garden variety exhibitionist, why would she want to be exhibited with a small dicked clown like her ex instead of the husband who would have given people something more worth watching? <p><p>

All in all, I thought the story was ok. You did have the bad guys get theirs in the end and the good guy happy and successful. The method of their comeuppance was good too - the bully gets beaten to paste by someone bigger and stronger and the vain user gets fat and ugly. Seems like poetic justice to me. Thanks for writing.

I may not have liked what happened or why but it was a well thought out story that ended well for those who "deserved" it.

I mean two stories under one title -that maybe a bonus in retail marketing; not so in story telling. The first round of spousal abuse was so intense and it came with the wife official declaration of her own pathology (sex addiction and who knows what else) you would be happy the husband came out alive. But then comes round number two and we go through the whole cycle all over again as if the first part never happened. The suspicions the discovery even the surprise! And on and on by the regular script to the happy final divorce. Please don't attach two stories and make them into one in the future. It does not reinforce any of them but it certainly makes me wonder if you thought that the husband (and the readers) suffer from amnesia.

When Buster started to push Joe around it reminded me of my high school days But im so happy about that Penny found Joe when after her husband was killed in that tragic accident i cried my eyes I give your story high marks .

Pat

The story is fairly well-written, not many typos or syntax problems. It reads nicely. My problem is not that I don't like the characters or the plot, it is the lack of credulity regarding their behavior. I did not down-rate this story to zero like Harry because it was, after all, a good effort and it is just a story. But nerd or not, I can't imagine any male behaving the way our hero behaved in this story. Harry is correct, he was assaulted both physically and sexually, so charges much more serious than drunk driving could have been filed against Buster. When Bev behaved as she did at the reunion, demeaning her husband and all the rest (not very original, "the alcohol made me do it"), then the marriage was clearly over. Even if somehow with counseling it could have survived, the nerd had plenty of money to pay private detectives to gather evidence of infidelity against Bev; he did not need to take risks or go to the scene of the crime to get information. Nerds who are successful are not stupid (he even says this in the story when he realizes he will just get beaten if he confronts Buster during the dancing episode); why does this nerd behave stupidly? Please don't tell me that love makes one blind, causes denial, etc. He was suspicious when he found out about the lies concerning the cell phone, the money for taking her parents out, etc. Surely that's enough. Nerds make the best husbands -- look it up on the Internet! But this nerd seemed to be awfully stupid when it came to common sense.

For the person who said it was glenda that came back into his life your wrong it was PENNY who came back into his life at the end of the story read the story again and wear your glasses this time.

Usually I come here for a good read to get me off.

I have just read ït and I found it to be an excellent read. Usually I read to just see myself to satisfaction, but your story got interesting and I couldn't stop until it was finished. This has been the only story I have read through without having the sexual gratification that I get from the rest of the stories. I got a more enjoyable satisfaction than masturbating to a quick sex story.

Good work & thanks.

I enjoyed this story. It's nice to find a story where the husband that is being cheated on it's a whip. and lets his wife and is lover walk over him and take over his home and his money.

Very good

six pages too many

In what year was this story written? 2020? 2030? ... cell phones did not start becoming common until the late 90's, and both main characters had one (which probably puts the story into the 2000s), yet the narrator just celebrated his 25th with Penny?

None of this story makes any sense. That reunion thing was over the top, and surely someone would have called the cops. Can you imagine Penny sitting there with her husband, knowing what was going on in the hospitality suite, as the minutes ticked away, yet doing nothing? Can you imagine the hotel staff not calling the cops? Or nine cars driving away, when most of those people had hotel rooms? Or a supposedly extremely intellegent, successful businessman acting like such an idiot and not dumping her ass that night? Or him not coming up with something creative as revenge (oooooh, so clever, he sets her and her lover up on minor charges and has the cops do his dirty work, the passive agressive little wuss)?

If he was as smart as the author said he was, he would have done some extremely painful, permanent damage to Buster, and nobody would have been able to trace it back to him. Instead, the narrator is no smarter than the author. I'm sorry, I usually try to suggest ways to improve stories that I dislike, but this one is so full of logical errors that I only read it all the way through due to the same reason that people can't tear their eyes away from a train wreck in progress.

but i do like the ending

the story is so far out he forgave her for what was done at the reunion so i don't think he would say anything no matter what she did.It just got silly after that.

BAD BAD STORY

Harry in VA said it all. I don't always agree with him but the story should have ended with consequences for the wife right after the reunion!

what a crappy story....

your another man hating cuckold loving writer.

it all happened. TK U MLJ LV NV

There is nothing really more to say.

I am so tired from read this story. I mean you covered everything. Thanks for sharing.

First off, Cliff let his life with his wife continue after the reunion when he should have just left her right then and there. She continued to cheat with Buster and Cliff was deaf, dumb and blind to the affair.

He was a cuck fool and he was lucky he found his old friend available to him and had a happy ending.

Could have been a great story but wasn't.

HA

bathing in syrupy jizz, he suckled the turgid rod, betrayed!

I honestly felt like the husband was a wimp, she was performing a gangbang at their highschool reunion & yet he still wanted to fix the "marriage?! I knew she married him for his money, I'm glad he was at least smart enough to have his money hidden. The husband was a moron, she showed him that she didn't love him nor did she have any respect for him on countless occasions but he continued to allow her to treat him this way, he never should've stayed married to her after the humiliation & disrespect she showed him during their reunion. Who marries a person after only knowing them for 8 months? I was with my husband for 3 years before he proposed & engages for another 2 1/2 years before we got married. We've been together for 10 years. Bev was a slut in school & he knew this so he doesn't get any sympathy from me.... A slut can't change the spots..

she would have been history - so he was a little bit cuck.

It is hard to feel a great deal of empathy for a two year long marriage.

An extremely wimpy guy! Not gonna say he was a willing cuck but he sure asked for it after that reunion! Only a willing cuck would've stayed after that! 2*

Ok a nerd is a high school thing. If you are 30 years old and still referring to yourself as a nerd then you need to see a counselor and consider leaving high school behind at some point in your life!

After being publicly humiliated by his wife while she joins a gang-bang at the expense of him and her marriage, he takes her back with no satisfactory explanation on her part? What the fuck?

The rest of the story was so-so, with the exception of the divorce which was some seriously retarded wish fulfillment. First off, nobody gets to set the terms of their own divorce, and the second Bev revealed to the judge that he's hiding money in an off-shore account, he'd have gotten raped in the divorce settlement because judges don't like it when people fuck with them. People can go "hurr hurr, but it's legal all the rich people do it", but the simple fact is that normal people think that it's shitty tax evasion and judges are normal people. Tell a judge "haha you can't touch my money, it's offshore" and the first thing he's probably gonna do is decide that you deserved to be cheated on and fuck you on the terms of divorce, which is set at his discretion. I like BTB, but that's just catering to the lowest form of fantasy - might as well have them both coincidentally die horribly of AIDs.

Anyway, back to the wimp thing - Bev just married him for stability and Penny just married him for a daddy for her kids. Neither loved him. Penny may have been honest enough to say so, but goddamn what a fucking pussy.

he was chuck and fucked and left out to dry and needless pain for that tramp of a wife

This is a story about a wimp with absolutely no balls at all. I kept thinking that he deserved to be shit on. If a man allows himself to be pissed on, don't complain about yellow rain.

If a 180 lb guy is running against 600 to 1000 lbs of beef, that's just a complicated way of committing suicide. So our "nerd" used the big muscle between his ears to counter their big muscles on their arms. Intelligent rather than "wimpy". (Other muscle-bound apes may disagree- so what!!)

The wimp part is pretty obvious. The part about the rich nerd and poor jock sends the message that right is money, which is exactly what the protagonist nerd himself sprouts, and makes him unlikable. Too bad the nerd didn't just win the lottery which would make the story simpler to write without the elitist trash.

Back to wimp wimp and slut!! is this all this author knows? Oh he is a dedicated little cucky boy!!

Is there ANYbody to like in this sad tale? Certainly none of the main characters, nor their wing-persons. Hubby is a total nerd, whose 'plans' are shitty, and whose methods of espionage are ludicrous!

Maybe 2 (Lit) pages woulda sufficed!

2.6 = 3*. (Just barely!)

...dude was a total dufus.

That bitch should have been history at the Reunion on the dance floor. What went down on the dance floor by the time the goons, tossed him across the floor told him everything he needed to know. What more do you need to see and understand? Dude should left that bitch, gone home and changed the locks on the house and dumped that slut.

Then after the exhibition sex at the reunion and getting kick in the ass, why would "saving the marriage" be part of any discussion or thinking.

this crap from a joke writer. smacks of auto-biography

Why didn't he divorce her right after the gangbang at the reunion?

Only married two years why would she get any alimony/spousal support?

She was employed when he met her again, so she can get a job and support herself, this is not a stay at home mother with small children.

Or why a share in any of his wealth?

This is treated as similar to profit sharing from a company, it takes several years until you "vest" in a profit sharing plan, you don't qualify in only two years.

Also the judge would consider blatant (with old boyfriend and gangbang) cheating in only two years a sign that she never intended to honor her vows and entered into the marriage fraudulently, instead of a divorce it could have been annulled.

Leaving aside the asinine story line of the character taking the ho back after the reunion, this story of an old man trying to write as a 20 something just rings wrong from the start. The cheerleader and the football star rule the school? When is this, 1962? Nerds are shunned? Since when? Nerdculture has been pretty much mainstream for nearly 20 years now.

The idea that a potentially billionaire technocrat goes around spying on his wayward wife himself is also ludicrous.

Seems to me that unless you are particularly well plugged into the culture of the time, you probably shouldn't try to see back more than a generation. Doing so without help or plenty of research makes your story look silly. I'm almost surprised that there weren't mcguffins added with newspaper stories or breaking newscasts on the radio.

especially when you are the sucker. TK U MLJ LV NV

I know this is fiction, but Buster and his buddies dominating the reunion is implausible. The later scenes in the hospitality suite were just more of the same. And he didn't throw her out. And he didn't think anything was wrong re her trips to see her folks. 2.5 stars - rounded up to 3.0.

I know the tale is years old and the author may be gone but the current selection of stories are so poor that readers must go thru the stacks for good stories to read. In the is story we find out that slut met buster some 7 times before the reunion. Are we supposed to believe she never told him she was married and to whom? The story indicates that when he cut in on the dance floor buster didn't know. A factual gap?

how can he stay with the slut so long? and some said he's not a pussy? come on!

for such a smart guy he is so incredebly stopid that this story is just stopid and not realy worth the read sorry :(

What baloney. Just the author's personal fantasy in action.

could knock me over with a feather

He should of divorced her the first time round. It would of been less of a heart ache and he could of gotten on with his life a lot sooner.

The good guys were very, very good, the bad guys were horrid! Ten years after graduation, many of the old football team members would have married, had kids, and gotten socialized. They would not all (or most) have been willing to be muscle for their HS star. A few might, but others would have stood up for the HS nerd!

Our Hero could not have dated several times without figuring out that she was vastly undereducated. Before he (still a virgin ... GMAFB) was educated in the carnal arts, he shoulda/woulda cared less about external glamour. Probably after his crash-course, as well.

Whatever happened to the former professor? I kept expecting him to play a surprise part later on in the tale. Don't add people just to validate one single (pretty unimportant) issue!

3*

Honeymoon scene, a very loving giving wife. Nothing else indicates otherwise. She has a husband who is successful and after he makes his transformation from nerd is socially acceptable. Now it's one thing if Buster was moderately successful, or even held a regular job or something. But the guy is practically homeless and she is in love with him and using the husband for money?

I have dated quite a bit of women and maybe I've been lucky that I have dated well-educated intelligent women, but I just cannot relate to a woman being into someone like Buster. I had an Ex who I became friends with after our breakup and she dated this 6'6" total muscle dude from our gym briefly and she told me that it was purely sex and she would literally tell him not to talk and shush him. Apparently he was dumb as a doorknob. There is no way she considered a relationship with him. But in this story it sounds like Bev is in love with Buster and using the husband. Don't get it. I guess I'm glad I've never been with a moron like that. It's really a tragic story, what low IQ does.

Dear, God, where to start?

The reunion was writen like they were juveniles and not even high school seniors. People change and ten years after graduation they've probably changed quite a bit. Look at obesity statistics.The thickhead "jocks" are probably all carrying a spare tire under their shirt or worse. And as for the nerds (abandoned husbands) sitting at the nerd table. It was 100% cliche.

After that fiasco the slut would have been enjoying a one way ride to the happy little haven of divorvce-ville. No man would have taken her back, not under any circumstances, save certifiable insanity. And while on that subject, the protagonist a, so-called "man" had no recognisable attributes any man would find familiar. Not one! No feelings of any kind a man would empathise with. Betrayal doesn't count. A woman can feel that as deeply as a man, even if for different reasons. A man has feelings, instincts and drives that really are not that hard to understand. The strength, depth and subtley is where the variation is. This guy was not written like a man, just a wimpy, female caricature of one. A guy can be a nerd. That doesn't make him a wimp. Don't confuse muscle mass and steriod abuse with attitude. What you had here was just a feminised cliche character.

Then he capitiulated like a good little cuck.

Just sped through the rest.

But it just doesn'y end.

Then he has to talk to her dad.

And still it didn't come to an end.

BIBones wrote "Bev's story is rather pathetic." Sadly not as nearly pathetic as me for reading it. I just can't get that time back.

1*

Enjoy that guy. To stupid,too forgiving, to easy ,too readily a cuckold.

Took to long to gently burn the bitch. He should have cut her loose after the first time he caught her. Decent, but not great.

Took to long to gently burn the bitch. He should have cut her loose after the first time he caught her. Decent, but not great.

the pain and hurt never subsides, TK U MLJ LV NV

This story was pathetic and I'm sorry to have read it through. First, Bev had been seeing Buster and getting away with it since before the Reunion. Why would she risk it by bringing it out in the open? Then the hotel requires security any time they rent out their ballrooms. Security would have had either Buster or both out of there after ther first altercation on the dance floor. Also , you can't have your earnings in an offshore account without having IRS auditing you. This story was written for the husbands benefit just like all the other stories I read here. So there was nothing new here just some name changing. The hubby ends up with the best wife in the world and the ex wife and her lover are left destitute. Same ole story. And really I was hoping for aomething new.

... and every one has been marvelous. Wow! Someone new for me to catch up on.

For this story 5-stars & Favorite

What kind of fucking moron keeps a slut for 18 months who participated in a gang bang and facilitates the multiple separate assaults, kidnapping, and sexual assault of her husband?

stupid cuck wanting to keep a gang bang cunt in matrimony

I dont feel sorry for stupid people - stupidity is an act of will

I kept hoping that he would grow some balls, pathetic! Anyone who would let the bitch back aftrr what she did at the reunion, is a cuck wimp bitch, oh wait a minute, I don't want to insult female dogs by calling him a bitch. Sad fucked up story. Wish i could vote a quarter star.

By the way having trouble signing in lwcby is the name.

Called friend Sgt after

Too late why didn't call immediately when first started or hotel security

Give her ultimatum leave now or don't come home

Lots of ways to stop

Good hotel not going to allow disturbances

Agree can I give 1/10 star

Why would you take her back after the disrespect she showed you at the reunion...and even if you felt sorry for yourself and took her back...why would you not “trust but verify”

Read again. Bev and Buster didn’t end up very well, but still not enough revenge for what she did to him.

Take her back after the reunion? No is the answer. . Please don't write the MC as being smarter than a monkey if you are going to have him make decisions dumber than an amoeba. It just made it all nauseating.

Reunion should have been the end of it. Why would he ever touch her again? She was disgusting.

Sweetie admits to needing a variety of sex partners. Hubby has to do it all himself, so does NOT hire a P.I. Just tries (ineptly) over a many months, whenever he thinks about it and has the time, to manage Sweetie going to visit her parents by making telephone calls at a FIXED time, and giving her cash to take her folks to dinner.

This is an insult to We-The-Readers. Hubby gets an MBA from U.VA. a superb university. In the process, he impresses a graduate professor to assist him in starting and maintaining a highly productive and lucrative business. Then proceeds to screw up as blaring a gold-digger and ingrate as can be found in LW.

I barely managed to give this travesty three stars. Wrong ... 2* are ample.

I didn't enjoy this one, and began speed reading it to avoid the totally unlikeable characters. The "smart nerd" was an idiot, so rather than someone to root for, it was easy to hate his vapid responses to whatever was happening to him. His wife belittled him to her old flame, she fucked her old flame in front of him, and he is going to work on their relationship?

Uhhh, not the sharpest tool in the shed, this fellow. Maybe if he had seen her fucking her old boyfriend after the old boyfriend beat him up a couple of times he wouldn't think reconciliation was a possibility. Wait, that's what happened, but nerd genius is ready to keep working to keep that beautiful relationship.

Overly long, rock stupid characters, not much to recommend in this opus. On the other hand, I have read much worse on this site, so there is that.

Yeah I agree with some of the other comments, you tried to paint the main character as someone who grew up and wouldn't let anyone walk all over him again, but then his wife runs a train, mocks him, humiliates him and laughs when he's assaulted, and he's like okay that's fine.

Just kind of makes no sense at all tbh.

This made little sense. The activities at the reunion (done in a similar manner numerous times by others) was the story, everything after that was just blah, blah, blah. Not a good story.

Ridiculous. No suspension of disbelief is possible after the reunion event. No man would do anything but divorce the slut. What the "Bev" character did was way over-the-top.

When writing trashy stories, it's usually best to make them fun. This was treated as a serious story, which led to some unintended hilarity, but that's about it.

After what happened at the reunion he should have dropped her, the idea that they could humiliate him like that and he was trying to repair their relationship... Nope.

You should have named it "Clueless".

As soon as the disrespect started at the reunion, it was obvious what Bev was.

To think about a reconciliation after the first round was absurd. He just forgave her for having a gangbang while he was tied to a chair, assaulted and humiliated?

He didn't know what was going on when she started getting out of town, away from hubby's posting eyes?

He didn't know what he was seeing when he saw 2 men at a 'girls night' for just 2 women, after discovering she has been taking money under false pretenses?

Wow, I wanna meet this guy, I have a great investment scheme he needs to get on the ground floor on.

The one saving grace for our hero is that the antagonists were thicker than him.

Should have divorced her immediatly after her gangbang

Bullshit

How could he possibly accept her back after what she did to him at the reunion? It wasn't just the sex - it was the way she mocked him. He had no self-respect. I'm sorry, but the main character is a pathetic figure.

The was the truly unpleasant story of a shameless slut, her nerdy cuck and her shiftless bull. It took the tragic death of a real man in a plane crash to set the circumstances under which the cuck finally could latch onto a decent woman. What a total waste of a y-chromosome the MC repeatedly showed himself to be.

Agree with some other comments. Not sure how Mr. Nerd could succeed in the business world when he was so easily duped by Bev. As another pointed out, he’s tied up, gagged (of course he was beaten first while Bev mocked him), then made to watch Bev fuck Buster and others. And he forgives her? He doesn’t hire a PI to find out what she’s up to (obviously he shouldn’t trust her any longer)? Makes little sense.

This is a great story and I give it five stars. Cliff recovered from marrying Bev who was pretty on the outside but ugly on the inside where it really counts. She ruined her life and regrets it but Cliff has moved on and married Penny and they have had a wonderful life together. I was happy that Bev and Cliff never had any children together. This story mirrors how life truly can happen with a good guy finding a woman who loves him for just himself and the trashy cheerleader getting the lousy life she deserves based upon the life choices she made. Great story

he is a wimp

he’s tied up, gagged (of course he was beaten first while Bev mocked him), then made to watch Bev fuck Buster and others. And he forgives her?

he gave her so many chances and she used him

not a realistic story at all

badly written, full of holes, and the fact that the idiot lets his wife come home after the reunion... wtf?

I don't know why Lit takes down the good stories and keeps these type of POS.

This POS could have been done in 3 times less words.

Such a pathetically written story.

Doesn't even deserve 1 star.

This is an adult version of Popeye, Olive Oyl, and Bluto, which made it doubly asinine. The Martian Slut Ray is hardly a literary device except in LW.

He was a very weak character. Their marriage should have never survived the reunion.

The only characters I feel sorry for are her parents. They will never be grandparents. Their family ends with her.

This needs a sequel where Penny realizes what a wimpy cuck she got married to and gives him what he deserves. What kind of man sees his wife getting fucked in front of him, gets beaten by her bull and the next day just sits to talk about it? Cuck even got hard in a situation any non-cuck would be disgusted and unable to do so. Not getting cucked in his second marriage would be unfathomable, he practically has it written on his forehead.

This story is beyond absurd 🤮

a) After her behavior at the reunion NO MAN would talk to her, let alone give her a chance. "In Vino Veritas" has truth in it. He should, all but an idiot would have, completely at her word. He should have taken stuff and left the house. Had no further contact and started divorce process as rapidly as possible Note two she honestly told him she was a slut who needed other dicks. Anyone with a brain would have understood, from that, what his future held.

b) Given her history all these visits to mom and dad woukd raise a red flag. If not that mom lying about what his wife had been doing. Hence he should have gone to check immediately.

c) Sneaking around that house when the lights were are totally unnecessary; look out your window at night and you will see nothing.

I'm willing to allow authors considerable latitude but stories like this insult me.

This author can kiss this reader goodbye.

Shit read.

1. A real wife wouldn't ask to purposely be away from, nor would she stay gone. If she does stay gone, go get her ass.

2. How is she going to call Buster a loser, then flirt and dance with him. Before you, even. How is that not a red flag?

3. Knowing how loose she is and how she is when she drinks, why would you allow it anyway? Obviously you don't own her, but a loving wife would consider your opinion and at least try.

4. Should have left her ass there as soon as she became disrespectful. If she didn't come home, or brought two guys back, start the divorce.

5. No way would any self respecting man stay with her after the events at the reunion. As for getting hard during, you got hard from physical stimulation, not their proclivities. I won't knock you for that.

6. No one after the age of 16 wants to stay with their mother 3 days a week. Except for Norman Bates.

7. How does a "smart nerd," who controls all the finances and has access to it all nit know what the fuck his wife is getting up to for years?

8. Your revenge was garbage. Might as well have ordered 500 dollars worth of pizza to their love nest and tp'd the friends house.

9. You had every red flag in the world when you talked to her mom, then her, and then she accidentally answered her cell after saying she didn't have it, and you were like "something is going on and I'm going to get to the bottom of this." Couldn't have been more clear if he mushroom stamped your forehead.

10. There's more but I'll end here. This should have been 2 pages.

This story is about a very stupid wimp of a MC who only, by extreme luck, escaped having his father's sperm being ejaculated into a baboon or better yet on to the ground!! He can almost be forgiven for not catching on to the bitch’s infidelities prior to the reunion but from that point on he is just a plain loser paying his wife to whore herself out to an old boyfriend and likely his friends!!

The MC is a world class CHUMP! Fool me ounce, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me.

Good story. Buster was an asshole that needed terminal attitude adjustment. I’ve never heard of a Buster, including my cousin Buster, who wasn’t an asshole. Bev was a whore long before she got paid for it.