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I spent the entire chapter HARD.
CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER..
Your writing is FANTASTIC
THIS REMINDS ME OF WHEN I'D WATCH A GREAT SERIES ON TV AND THEN HAVE TO WAIT AND TUNE IN THE NEXT WEEK TO CONTINUE THE MYSTERY. I LOVE IT THIS WAY! GREAT STORY WITH SO MUCH LOVE AND SO MUCH THOUGHT PUT INTO THE STORY LINE. THESE STORIES MAKES ME MISS THE YEARS AS A SENIOR EDITOR. KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT STORY, PLEASE!
Your writing is too good. Can you put out a chapter to each series every day? Kidding not kidding.
I check every day to see if you have posted something new. I get so engrossed I can't put them down. I always look forward to your next chapter.
another 5 stars!!! keep them coming. you've got a long way to go with this. and thanks for writing it. its a really good story with great characters!
I binged on every chapter today. Another 5* for this chapter. I don't know if you need to go to those other stories quite yet. This one needs to at least partially resolve into a cliffhanger ending before leaving it. Then we can anticipate the sequel until you come back to it to make a tragedy or a happy ever after finale.
Sorry, I could only give you 5 stars. This is my FAVORITE series. Please keep it going
I would have loved it if Brad had sucked on Richard's cock when they were in the study.
Very nice series.
I was anxious for David to hurry up and fuck Brad. Sorry it hasn't happened yet I hate having to wait for it
Great story I hope you plan on continuing this story line.
Definitely need more... There are a number of loose ends just waiting to be tied. Please do not keep this fan of yours waiting too long...!
I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next few chapters.
Can everybody share the love and have sex without hurting the others?
This story is to fantastic to have anything but a beautiful ending.
You did it I accually had tears in my eyes... After the Bennett's and Williams's family had dinner and Kami called Bradley the emotions of it all just got to me.... good job... I really like this story....
I know. The chances of this happening in real life is slim to none. But its certainly a feel good story. Better than most of these family stories as the characters have been developed and are likable. Unlike some "my mom and I bumped in the hallway and fucked on the spot" stories. Because THAT happens all the time. Right?
Love the entire story and enjoyed every minute.