by williepeter
A strange tale: it was like the author had the idea of a plot, decided to write the story but couldn't be bothered so published some notes.
I understood what had happened in the end and checked to see if I'd missed some previous parts, but apparently not. I think this might have been a very good story with some characterization and more and better narrative, maybe a bit of dialogue, but as it is its like reading the synopsis with a spoiler tacked on. I'd like to read a fuller, more involved version but sadly I'd now know the outcome.
Wow an honest story that I can actually believe in noncon. Who would have thought it possible. Well done.
"I swallowed it all," then Cindy wiped cum from my chin? Did she or didn't she? I should have stopped there. This story was beyond stupid, oh, and if you insist on writing, learn a little grammar.