by hotfunpen3
And sad. Selfishly, I hope I die before my wife-and this story spells out why.
I still enjoyed it. Very well done. Certainly brought a tear to my eye.
She must have been a special person.
I wonder what happened to her? Did she die or did she find another man to be with?
...since your big hint says she just croaked. How well she blew me is the last thing I'm thinking about if my honey just died. Good but for that disjunction. Actually if digdaddycommentmachine was in the right ballpark I'd be even less "melancholy" if she'd just up and left. I was gonna just complain that it seems odd that she loved to tongue his torso so much but never got him to do some "manscaping'., but what the hell.
but i dont see my comments. so here it is - just great - really beautiful!
This was a well told well written and sad loving wives snapshot . Well Done!!
Thanks for writing & posting this. I've thought of it quite out-of-the-blue .... which is unusual ... So it made quite an impression upon me.... Thank you
Sometimes all you have left are the memories. Luckily in this case they are sweet ones. Excellent.
The power of a memory is so strong as to almost seem real. This story is amazing! Very well written and a wonderful snapshot into what must have been a very special relationship with a very special person.
Thank you for sharing.
It was powerful, disturbing, and very original. The author captured the horrible loneliness of losing a spouse. This is going to stay with me for a long time.