All Comments on 'Wash Away the Pain'

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Greyhair61Greyhair61almost 12 years ago
Brilliant.

Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great Read

5* Erotic but yet thought provoking.Nice job

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

5* Thought provoking

chytownchytownalmost 12 years ago
Thanks***

For Sharing.

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 12 years ago
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A very sweet testimonial to the late Sweety!

BTTapBTTapalmost 12 years ago
Well done

And sad. Selfishly, I hope I die before my wife-and this story spells out why.

nakdsubnakdsubalmost 12 years ago
I guess the end about half way through but..

I still enjoyed it. Very well done. Certainly brought a tear to my eye.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Sad, but well written.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
Wow !!! This is fucking sad

She must have been a special person.

I wonder what happened to her? Did she die or did she find another man to be with?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Cuck whore

put it in fetish were it belongs. 1*

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpetealmost 12 years ago
Well written but kind of creepy....

...since your big hint says she just croaked. How well she blew me is the last thing I'm thinking about if my honey just died. Good but for that disjunction. Actually if digdaddycommentmachine was in the right ballpark I'd be even less "melancholy" if she'd just up and left. I was gonna just complain that it seems odd that she loved to tongue his torso so much but never got him to do some "manscaping'., but what the hell.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
RUB A DUB SCRUB

the body as Alladins lamp, TK U MLJ LV NV

cantbuymycantbuymyalmost 12 years ago
i know i gave u a 5

but i dont see my comments. so here it is - just great - really beautiful!

rvwsrvwsalmost 12 years ago
Good Story

Turned out kind of sad though. 5*

BourbondogBourbondogalmost 12 years ago
Anon cuck whore? What story was he reading ?

This was a well told well written and sad loving wives snapshot . Well Done!!

Pinkpeony101Pinkpeony101almost 12 years ago
Excellent!

Thanks for writing & posting this. I've thought of it quite out-of-the-blue .... which is unusual ... So it made quite an impression upon me.... Thank you

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 12 years ago
Wonderful

Sometimes all you have left are the memories. Luckily in this case they are sweet ones. Excellent.

BBWseekingBBWseekingover 9 years ago

Wasn't expecting that ending. Tears in my eyes.

ptolmetptolmetover 7 years ago
Brilliant!

The power of a memory is so strong as to almost seem real. This story is amazing! Very well written and a wonderful snapshot into what must have been a very special relationship with a very special person.

Thank you for sharing.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsalmost 5 years ago
That really was brilliant! 5*****

It was powerful, disturbing, and very original. The author captured the horrible loneliness of losing a spouse. This is going to stay with me for a long time.

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