All Comments on 'Washing Away the Pain Ch. 04'

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twistidmonkeytwistidmonkeyover 5 years ago
this caught me off gaurd

i didn't recall the title of this story right away and almost past it up but something told me to check out the other chapters and I'm glad i did. when you ended chapter 3 you wrote it well that it was a great ending to the story but I'm happy to see this chapter the one thing that was missing was being confronted by the parents. so happy to see you are continuing this story still hope it ends happy but ill wait and see

sabra16023sabra16023over 5 years ago
Good Story

Waiting for next chapter. Thanks

NAVDOC73NAVDOC73over 5 years ago
Why

Why did you wait 7 years to finish this?

mrdata9770mrdata9770about 3 years ago

The confrontation with the family. The truth shall set you free. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"I know" ?? Seriously? That's the way he shows her how he feels? So many missteps in what *could* have been a fantastic story arc. This is one of the lesser of those, but to end a chapter in that way? Blech.

Diecast1Diecast1about 1 month ago

Love the story. AAAAAA++++++

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