All Comments on 'Watcher'

That was hawt. Please wright more for this.

Your story is wonderful and so hot, I hope that you will write a next chapter.

Let's have a continuation on this story

OK, so the concept is great - 32 different apartments, each tenant with a different scene for us. But your great concept is marred by poor grammar and editing. Either learn how to punctuate dialogue and write in complete sentences, or run the story past an editor first. Also it's about twice as wordy as it needs to be. Less step-by-step verbiage, more punch. Again, try and find an editor. I think you have a lot of potential here, it's worth taking the time to polish and improve.

Oh, and not every woman needs to have a shaven pussy. I bet in 32 apartments, some of them are natural.

I have tried polishing the story. It's Oct,11 and I have just put in a corrected draft.

I've really enjoyed reading all of your stories, I just finished 'Watcher' and was curious about the endind. Are you planning on writing a sequal? If so, doyou have any idea about a post date? my e-mail is b_fitzgeralds_3@yahoo.com

Keep up the good work, I plan on reading em all, thanks

Great story. A lot of variation and not boring at all.

Would love to see a sequel. And a sequel to the sequel.

Not only badly written but implausible. Not everyone is a pervert like you seem to think. And, if I found out that my land lord had installed devices like that, he would get his ever lovin' ass kicked and I would make sure that all of the tennants would know about it and have a turn at him. We'd also destroy his devices and computer room completely.

Very long story but i enjoyed it very much,please keep this one going.

You should really start writing more sequels, love your ideas

i would enjoy reading more about your encounter and more that happened later.. Continue in the spying and making the girls think it is there sons..

Awesome, hot story. I have one complaint though, I can't not see the spelling and grammar mistakes... They are a huge distraction!