All Comments on 'Watchers'

Weird chick!

5

Nice and evil.

Sufficiently spooky!

Wonderfully dark and spooky!

The eternal punishment of a voyeur? Strange story, but I liked it. 5*~~JB

Very interesting. Your writing had my attention throughout the story. 5*****

This was a good creepy story. One can always count on your stories to be well-written. I felt sorry for Matt. though; I almost wished he'd been a more negative character so I could feel like he deserved it. My story has a somewhat similar arc with a male protagonist.

Poor Matt. Even though there are certainly more unpleasant ways to leave this world.

Thank you for this great story!

The bedroom scene with Nyx bizarre/unreal yet easily pictured — felt frighteningly real/intensely erotic. What made the piece even more enjoyable was the way you moved us/your story from light banter, Halloween party atmosphere to the more macabre — slowly elevated the tension/his fear while maintaining Halloween spirit.

Not the usual thing. Great imagery. Somehow, I expected Matt to get away but for a one and done story, your ending makes good sense. Properly macabre, too. 5*

Scary ….. so real men should be careful, talking to beautiful strangers might end in a twisted plot ….. so Nyx is dangerous, like spiderwoman comes out tonight and having me for dinner, yummi …. But im not on her menu, as she is hunting women or men, ☺️ , sissy’s are diverse , 😃

Interesting short tale and ten witches 🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🧙🏻🧙🏻🧙🏻🧙🏻🧙🏻🧙🏻🧙🏻🧙🏻✨💝

What a skillful wordsmith you must be! I look forward to a followup story as that ending was not as intoxicating (to me) as the rest of the story. Thanks for posting.

Wonderful! A fun read and superbly written.

Well done.

Another great story, thank you.