All Comments on 'Watching'

Just slapping her in the face is not a Dom/sub tactic. And very jarring. Giving a command and a standard that she disobeyed would be one thing, but because you don't establish that beforehand it just feels like abuse.

It's a shame, everything else is wonderfully written.

All of your stuff is well written and this was so beautiful. I understood the slap was for the lying which is a no no in our world. We don’t get to lie or say no, now do we? At least in fantasy anyway. He knows her like any good Dom should know his sub and so he knew she was lying thus it warranted the punishment. At least he is not I hope as violent as most of the men in your stories who are really not Doms but women abusers. Using women for punching bags, black eyes, swollen jaws, etc. is not BDSM. There are men out there in our world who know and live the difference. Keeping you in prayer.