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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent story. I would love to have my wife get off on watching me make love to a man. I only wish this trio took it further. He needs to be fucked with her watching. Perhaps another chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

love the stor,, like the fact that you had your wife watching.. it would be more hot if you resisted a bit..a little bondage and making her suck you as he had you being faced fucked,, using the vibrator on you as you were face fucked she sucking you.. just a thought..enjoyed the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Been a fan since I first read "My Wife's Fucked Up Family". Loved that one as well as others, but this was the best one yet. This checked just the right number of boxes on the kinky list. And you did that without Leo going to the extreme or Jack becoming the gayest man alive in one evening. This was very believable. I honestly don't know why you'd need to continue this story, but I'd love it if you did. Whatever you decide, this story gets *****plus. MLF

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hilarious...and sweet. Wouldn't mind seeing more of Leo. He's a cool character.

walt555walt555over 1 year ago

I dug it, i think another visit from leo is needed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I really like these themes were is way more a kink being explored.

They still love each other and the sexy stuff is really fun.

Maybe she could have her hubby be on a pretend date? It can be like a scene that she is directing.

MVP6MVP6over 1 year agoAuthor

A pretend date - a great idea.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleabout 1 year ago

I really loved it!. For me, a guy who went from straight to bi similarly to this, I came several times. I'll wait til tomorrow to read ch. 2! Thanks.

1Martiniman1Martiniman3 months ago

Bravo! This was a fantastic story and so well written. Very erotic the way the wife directed the action and set up hubby for her pleasure. Having her talk and direct so much really set up the excitement. I would have liked to see hubby get fucked raw in front of his wife while she filmed it, but maybe in another story…soon.

I’m excited to read part 2 next.

If you like married eroticism and pushing boundaries for love…this is a must read!

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