All Comments on 'Watching Cyn (or was it Sin)'

Extremely well written, and very, very erotic.

Love very well written I so hope there are more parts to the story

gulfmedic1 and anonymous

Thank you so much for your positive comments. I always meant this story to be a slower pace, exploring the emotions between a wife, her husband and the mysterious voyeur. Hopefully this comes through in understanding her initial frustration, then the opportunity, and with it some attention and just a little rekindled excitement. Should she have reacted the way she did? I guess that's down to the reader to decide.

So, you asked about more chapters. Well, the rules of the competition are that this should be a standalone story, so that's what it is... a self-contained window looking in on one older woman's predictable life. I do wonder though just what she has in mind for the young lad. She did seem rather keen to teach him a thing or two. I guess that's another window and maybe one day it will be opened just like this one.