All Comments on 'Watching Paige's Back'

by S_Hollister

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice introduction

Well written, good character development in the short time allowed. Would like to see some backstory to Melanie, and perhaps how she was hired and when Paige discovered her secret.

S_HollisterS_Hollisterover 4 years agoAuthor

@Anonymous I'm glad you like it. I do have a few ideas in the pipeline for a story about how Melanie came to work for Paige's family, but nothing concrete yet.

Ravey19Ravey19almost 4 years ago
Good Story

Well and tightly written. Hopefully more to come

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I write dirty stories. Some for my own entertainment, others for people who inspired me in one way or another. My stories will always have a heavily female focus, although I can't guarantee that male characters might not slip in in the future.

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