All Comments on 'Water and Fire - A Birthday Gift'

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blackknight314blackknight314about 2 years ago

Loved this story!

Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very hot! The sisters conpiring is really fun and exciting. David is a lucky guy.

Skipper600Skipper600almost 2 years ago

Well done. Good story, well witten. It deserves at least one more chapter. If for no other reason than to know that it's NOT a one time thing. Also, 'aunty' has offspring. What about them?

BassNutt51BassNutt51almost 2 years ago

Great cumming of age story, what a better way to than to have people you love celebrate it like that. Writing it's very good and I was so engrossed that I didn't see any mistakes. I really appreciate your work, thanks for writing πŸ‘πŸ˜œ

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome story way to celebrate an 18nth birthday with loving sex with the people you love, you need to continue with more of this story and what about the Aunts children??????????????????

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