All Comments on 'Water the Fire'

Such a well written, stunning, and thought provoking story. Thank you for sharing.

I couldn't stop reading, from the "what the hell is going on" opening to the sub-apocalyptic end. A clutching story. The sex itself was so odd, though- dramatic, at one point underwater, surrounded by fire, at the other, directly before death. Utterly original, but hard to identify with. There's something alien in watching two characters be wrecklessly sexual in a life-threatening situation. I feel as though the characters could be made a little more real, painted a little clearer. Still, fascinating and uniquely sexual.

Amazing

a wonderful way with words.