All Comments on 'WBDP - Brianna Delivers Pt. 12'

An excellent continuation of the story, combining the "slave time" with the party stuff. I didn't see how you could wrap up the story in one chapter; I'm glad you didn't force it to fit.

I was surprised to see Dawn join the group, even for a trial period. I look forward to seeing how that goes.

Even though I have read the entire series (so far???) I still want to see Dawn developed more also.

First time thru. . . .I have a B.S. in FOOD SERVICE MGMT. So, when I say that everything about the party was right on, I know what I am talking about. DEAR AUTHOR, you seems to know so much about so many things. Your ability to write about anything, well, EXCELLENT ! 5 stars.