All Comments on 'We Are All Together'

by rupaipanty

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MaternalyObsessedMaternalyObsessedover 10 years ago
* * 1/2

That hurt to read please take a course in

proper English. Or stick to writing in your

native language.

Unless there is a second chapter coming.

No incest takes place in this story meaning

it's in the wrong category.

RustedBeefRustedBeefover 10 years ago
Poorly Written

This would have been better if it was in the third person. You should also seriously consider reading up on how to improve your dialogue because damn....

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice

Two negative comments about this story are not proper. I like it very much.However it would be better if the fucking is to be done between Rabeya & her driver,similarly 3 sisters may choose their sex partner as their aged Night cook and commit various kinky activities with sweaty hairyarmpit,pissing etc.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
excelleny

I chanced upon ur writings. damn hot.

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