by Lesion563
gawd this was so fucking hot! and omg you gave me a shoutout! 😍 you guuuyyys.
Thank you for staying true to your writing style despite what others said. I think this story is really good. Looking forward to more.
If you would just write this in third person, all the endless and disruptive POV changes (sometimes way too close together) wouldn't have to happen. It would flow so much better with that change.
I have read countless stories on this site for years , its very rare for me to make a public comment , your story struck a chord with me , you may find this hard to believe you you just discribed my own life story , admittedly it was not so loving as your story but we were both adopted at a very young age and never knew about each other until we were in our 20s and we had met a couple of years before at a mutual friends and thats how we ended up together , until the day i met someone who new our parents and told me the truth about my then girlfriend . but your story is how i would have loved mine to have ended up . but alas not to be
Please continue For as long as you enjoy bringing joy to all the rest of us Please trust we can all avoid this Chinese craziness KrBillT bill49t@gmail.com
Great story. Well written. As a reader this story grips you and leaves you wanting more. Can't wait for the next installment
Great story, but Anna Is in Love with Kelly as well. Bring her into the mix especially since they know they are twins. Looking forward to part 3.
Well assembled and storyline spot on. At the last moment the two Nick and Anna discover they are siblings...but love will prevail, and these two were found by each other and developed a very strong need for the other. Their hearts will guide them to do what's
best. Keep the info sealed, continue on as they are...
WTF where is the next chapter?
Dear author please, please keep writing, we want, no, we need the continuation of this story.
It can't end like this...