by autoplot
In this series, the descriptions of sex between Amy and her mother and Amy and Sadie are very exciting! What guy wouldn't want to watch two gals having sex with each other, especially a mother and daughter? More Sapphic action in future installments, please!
You are simply one of the best authors writing for Literotica right now. Here's to hoping there are several more chapters in both of your continuing stories!
You need to add at least one more chapter if not more. What happens between Lauren and her son and does Amy find out and maybe join them?
this has been a really fun and sexy read,,,,,,really enjoying this coming of age sex romp,,,,the character development is wonderful and the dialogue is brilliant !! than ks so much!!
I'm not sure I understand but why is the sunshine coming through the windows always yellow? Does everyone have yellow stain-glass windows or someone wearing yellow tinted glasses/contacts. I know that when you draw a picture you would use yellow to indicate sunlight, but when you are telling a story you should use something like warm, radiant, bright, brilliant, dim, ect...
Other than that I really am enjoying your story, and look forward to seeing more from you. I just think you should discribe the picture and let it develope in your readers minds, instead of trying to paint it.