by wose
Pretty good read, except at the very beginning (Paragraph 2) your sister was "wearing nothing but a pair of shorts" and in the next paragraph "her perfectly toned ass on full display against the sheer fabric of her yoga pants".
Not my type of story. Despite that, it was a decent read. The only thing I would recommend is keeping better track of names. June and Angie got mixed up briefly on the last page.
Yes, a few faux-paus here and there...
Still, a nice story...not really into the male-male thing, but context was kinda nice...still...
And, the last comment, about getting along for a little while...are you leaving this open for a sequel (or sequels)??!!
Five Stars...⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I'll agree totally with what Texas Mad Dog said:
"Another guy except me, I thought, realizing this was Angie's first time with anyone else since I'd popped her cherry six months ago."
You mean June and not Angie. Angie is his slut sister. Several faux pas like that. 2/5