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All Comments on 'We Move On From The Kitchen'

by topcattopone

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Baloney_PonyBaloney_Ponyalmost 12 years ago
If you can't proofread your synopsis, what should a reader expect from the actual "story"?

Your synopsis: "Second adventure, icludes WAM, W/S and exhitionism"

"icludes"?

"exhitionism"?

Do we, the readers, know what you meant to type? Yes. Should we, the readers, bother to read the story if you can't even type the synopsis without screwing it up? Not this reader.

topcattoponetopcattoponealmost 12 years agoAuthor
I'm sorry about the synopsis typos.

I had to alter the propose synopsis as the one I wrote was too long. I did it in a rush, I will try to do better next time. I hope you can still bring yourself to try the story, others have liked it.

patilliepatilliealmost 4 years ago
Dont get the food fight as being at all sexual or titillating

but I am in fetish which is why I typically never come here.

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