by irxgbr
... use proper punctuation. I hate to see a good story ruined by missing punctuation marks.
Use the Volunteer Editor program if you don't know how to do it yourself.
Where is all this going? There is no story here. This is just a string of random fuck sequences best as I can tell. Was that what you intended?
Read really bad then, even worse now. Can't believe an author would put a name on this garbage.