by jroseemi
Thank God for that dinner date, the hot sex and the calming effect of Zach and Diego falling asleep together. It was the only thing took away the tense feeling I got from reading about the kidnapping and the anger I felt at the inept handling of the situation by the police in this chapter. Considering all of the sadness in this story already with Kali's death and Zach's MS, I probably wouldn't have continued on with this if Nadya had come to a bad end. But that's what good writing is supposed to do, provoke strong emotional reactions, and you certainly achieved that with this chapter. I'm wiped after reading this one but still looking forward to #5.
Not a fun time for Zach & Diego: MS, PTSD and a kidnapping. Here’s hoping the nice date, a bit of sex and a good nights sleep is just the beginning of some better days (and happier chapters) ahead for them!
What a clumsy organized kidnaping and police action even clumsier! As it has all been organized by 'Dumb and Dumber'! For a moment I've been thinking that Daniel has something with it but even he is not so stupid.
At least, this situation brought Zach and Diego closer, resulting in a beautiful and hot sex scene.
Looking forward the next chapter!