by R_D_Eddy
Reali loved this! More please? Id like to see what happens to Laura and her love life ...
lucky Sylvia! They turned her life around. I like that all these people are improving each other's lives. The 1st story was obviously more erotic, but even then the girls ended up with a better life, jobs, income, connection. It would be easy to turn this into serious dominence/mind control (that's what I was expecting LOL), but the way you wrote it was fantastic, very touching. I hope to see more along this line, do the 3 of them get with her submissive friends from suburbia? Though how was she checking her email if she couldn't read? Great story non the less.
It's really exciting to see such a different take on the whole mind-control theme. The use of mind-control in these stories as a liberating influence and not a dominating one was excellently done! Now, give us more!
MORE!!!
MOOOOOOORE!!!!
Please!
This is by far one of the most sophisticated erotic stories I've read.
I clearly can see a movie coming out of this.
Just found this story. I really like the idea, and wish it had more than two parts