by illicit_writer
I love to hear feedback on my stories. If you have something critical, please be constructive.
Descriptions Are Great! He Understands Kim's Work But He Is Still Very Horny, Masturbation To Web Porn Is Necessary For Sanity! Lauren Gives Glen Reason Not TOO Upset About Because She Already Thought Of Possibility! Meeting At Club With Remote Panties And Sex Situation In Car Is Cautious Beginning! Webcam Sex Is Fastforward To Next Chapter! Kim Will Know And Be Involved Soon, Max Work Or Not! Maybe OK Or Relieved Sister Takes Initiative! Lots Of Different Directions To Go! Great E-Book?
Enjoyed this story very much, and look forward to another chapter, Chapter 2 a definite 5. Her reaction, and willing participation were very erotic, brought out even more so by being watched by another couple. I would suggest that Lauren not only continue to use the website in ch.4, but demonstrate her new found sensuality by initiating further contact with Glen,
Please don't end this on chapter 3, Lauren has much more hot sex yet to be explored
All 3 chapters have been excellent, the pace is just right, really hope you publish more!
and the subscription gift is a nice touch .... seems as if she starts to like it as well. Though its too convenient. Just to keep a light mood and avoid issues?