All Comments on 'Wedded Wife to Lesbian Life Ch. 04'

Just a suggestion, research the details you are going to use in your store, because the errors distract the reader from your storytelling . Scuba breathing device - regulator. You don't Sail a cabin cruiser as it doesn't have sails. Buying expensive jewelry from an airport shop? Laughable. Grammar is also important

I read the comment by anonymous regarding the latest chapter of Wedded Life to Lesbian Life.

Thank you for letting me know about the two main areas of concern regarding the story. I will take your comments and suggestions to heart as I go on to write future stories.

Thank you very much for your suggestions. For in the long run I believe they will make me a better author.

so they are mermaids?since they can talk underwater.its time they talk about her leaving her husband or not

mostly I only give 4 stars except when it is a really good story, and having sex on the ocean floor is a very create way to do it, that is why I gave this part 5 stars

redlion75

Great joke - made me laugh