All Comments on 'Wedding Crashers Pt. 08'

this is a great story. im not a fan of cuck stories at all. But i am a fan of great stories

Oh No. First you try and make Nathan an "alpha" type male who just takes what he wants. Then, after he gets tied up, beaten, his eyes all swollen, a broken nose and a tooth actually knocked out of his mouth and others loosened, he does NOTHING back to the arsehole who did it! So, he's back to being a weak, pathetic, spineless, cuck. No self respect. Why the fuck didn't he kick Bob's fucken face in? Wacked him around the head a few times to at least make up for what Bob had done to him?

You are determined to retain him as a piece-of-shit, pissant little mouse. Why? He can't go and visit that island to withdraw any money. With his now criminal background and time spent in prison, he won't be allowed to get a visa. Jeez mate. Just shoot the guy and put him out of our misery.

This is the first chapter I didn't like. Very depressing. 2*

Better than most stories here; but goddamn, do you ever hate Nathan.

Nathan is one of the dumbest characters ever in LW

I'm really struggling to find how this belongs in LW. I mean this thing plays out like a twisted movie, but wife becomes a druggy gutter white and MC is a wanderer, so LW? Although the MC is a pushover, still really messed up how after all the shit his ex put him through with her slutting, and then to just completely abandoned him, just a sick person.

Love this story!!!!

You tried to butch up this chapter a bit, but it failed. It still reads as a gay fantasy. Maybe in another story you’ll explain why you hate women.

Wow. Been a very hard story to read, becasue you see two lives totally destroyed. It's very well written, and like reading a slow motion train wreck that turns into a dumpster fire that obliterates the whole town. It's kinda like an Aussie version of Sons of Anarchy (the US FX series that ran for several years). Very vivid characters and a wife that self distructs, with sex addiction in place of a drug addiction. Who knows if Nathan, survives? Waiting for part 9.

This story did not go where I thought it would go, but it has been an enjoyable ride. Feels more a drama with sex than just complete fantasy.

Thanks for the effort. Better luck next time.

This is the first story I’ve commented on in awhile and I have to say…it had some twists I didn’t expect and some of th usual claptrap.

I liked that there was no “BTB” moment. He didn’t draw upon his special forces training or his IT/computer software engineering company to catch his wife and exact retribution.

However, you really hated both the wife and the husband to punish them the way you did. And how many times do we have to read about a wife being raped and just like that, she got off on being hurt. Like that happens.

As much as I dislike your protagonist, he didn’t deserve prison and turning him into a rapist was over the top. And yes, when Claire said stop, please don’t, and he proceeded to have sex with her, even when she was crying in her bedsheets, he showed us that at his core, he was nothing better than a common rapist.

The ending was about what I expected.

All in all, it was ok, better than most of the stories here but in someways….no better either and that’s a real shame because this could have been so much better.

This is not a great story as some make it out to be. I guess that depends on the character of the reader. Most comments were right on with their critique. Does it really matter what I think? Nah.

Another ugly, awful chapter.

Can't stop reading this tragedy.

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Shame the earlier parts had all that cucky fag nonsense. This has the bones of a good tale.

Actually this has been the best of the lot