by FrigOfFury
I really liked the story telling, but I was expecting it to be a buildup into a very detailed sex scene, especially with the final transformations. But that didn’t quite happen, unfortunately. Oh well.
I thought the anonymous comment regarding the lack of a sexy climax was fair, so I added one (currently in a pending draft). It ended up being a little less of a detailed sex scene per se than I expected going into it, but hopefully readers still enjoy it as erotic payoff.
That was ruined when you brought out the chick with a dick.this a lesbian story not fake out the reader story. I hate it when I'm lied to.