All Comments on 'Wedding Night'

What a perfect way to start married life

The story line was good. I liked the plot and where things were going. However, speaking in a writers sense, you used quite a few of the same phrases numerous times, like "ample breasts". Keep that in mind next time. I will admit, it made me wet, though! I actually finished to it!

the driver drove into the "basement" ? was the driver drunk? ( smiling )