All Comments on 'Wedding Night'

LilacQueen15 is right. Honestly if something like that had happened to me the first time there wouldn't have been a second time. There was literally nothing but pain for her the first time, and people wonder why women don't like sex as much.

Defloration doesn't have to hurt that badly. A little more care and some self discipline would have been a big help.

Only a few grammar mistakes in both

stories (insider her-- should be inside her)

And mike In "Slave Night" should be a capital

M in mike. Other wise a nice and tender story.

I gave you a big 5-0. Write More. Hope you

were not injured in Afghanistan.