All Comments on 'Wedding Surprise'

I hope you continue the story .

You need to get these guys' names sorted! Dave becomes Mark and Mark becomes Jack, it really pulls you out of the story. Another jarring distraction is the odd colour schemes you mention! Salmon pink with a purple tie?? A shame as it detracts heavily from an otherwise decent story

Love the story and the seduction ...

I do agree with one of the previous comments about names and such, though to me it didn't distract from the story itself. It would be easily remedied by sending it to an editor or proofreader to sort problems like this and any grammatical problems before it's published. I'm sure another member or reader would be willing to help.

Well done really looking forward to seeing if this is just the first chapter of many.

Kev (UK)

UGH, make up your damn mind about the names, you changes too many times. 1*

This is a good start, yes there was a mix up in names that should have been fixed. But this did not take anything away from to real story. I really hope to see more chapters on this. Nice job and don't worry about some of the bad comments, some people have nothing better to do than complain about the little things.

HOPE THERE IS MORE TO COME OF IT, WE ALL MAKE MISTAKES, JUST SOME PEOPLE THINK THEY ARE PERFECT, GOT SOME NEWS FOR THEM, THEY AIN'T...

Dude

This is one hot fucking story, I would love to see a part two that maybe a year later and Mark had to travel for work and run into Dave again. again wonderful

Not only does he get to fuck the bride in the morning ( I hope ) but Mark gets beautifully laid by the gay guest. Lucky Mark.