All Comments on 'Wee Wee Camp: A Humping They Did Go'

The plays on words and dry humor really distract from the story

its fuckin stupid! we read these stories to get horny, and to get off... as the previous commentor indicated, all the dumb ass word play and silly rhymey stuff makes it damn near impossible to get into! is "MeetTheHumpers" an intelligent, articulate sort? yes, thats pretty obvious but this style of writing is extremely ill suited to erotica.