All Comments on 'Week at the Cabin Ch. 01'

This was a good start. Looking forward to more

Please be careful to erase the old wording when making revisions. Otherwise, this was a great submission. Pun intended.

Tell me more please.

Looking forward to the rest of the week!

Great start.

This was a really great read, can’t wait for more

Heads up (in case anybody is really waiting on the follow up) -- this project is on indefinite hiatus! I may return to it in the coming months (or years), but I'm thinking I will rewrite this first chapter, clean it up a little and change a few details.

Thank you all for the feedback!