by hottie_nikita
Hey! That's a very good follow up story. Hope you'll write the next part/(s) quickly.
You are getting better! And, me greedier! Don't want this story to get over. Keep writing.
Niki, must admit, your stories and your profile become my daily dose of erotica. Rock it, baby!
This one is even better than the first chapter. By that logic, the third will be even better. Hoping to see it soon :)
You are a good writer, but, I feel you over-detail your stories. The sex is written well, and the situations are quite innovative. But, the detailing could be curtailed a bit.
Delicious Nikki, or is it yummilicious.... love those bouncing titties darling. Gimme more
This is the first time one has imagined a jacuzzi so erotically. Well done.
Your stories both, are genuinely outstanding. First up, as an Indian, your language is perfect, which is a revelation. To top that, the real feel and the detail. Your stuff is way different from a lot of the others out here. Keep it that way, and don't ever stop writing.
would love to read about how you started things with varun ;) great stuff nikki
cheers!
Very very hot and arousing sex. Is it a true story? If yes, you guys are one hot couple. If not, your imagination is very wild.
The best I've read by an Indian. And the compliment is from an Indian :)
I loved your stories. Seem so real, I felt envious of Varun ;-)
You are most definitely the find of Literotica in the past year. Astounding skills.
I'm so totally overwhelmed by the response to my 2 stories!!! The number and kind of emails I get daily, is mindblowing. And, the fact that my stories have been rated so highly that they are among the Top 10 all time, makes it even more encouraging.
In the past month and a half, I have had a personal tragedy and then an injury to deal with, and hence have been out of action. But, with all your love, I will soon make up for lost time. You will see a flurry of stories soon!
As for all the mails, please give me a few days, and I will respond to each one of them. To all those who want to just get into my pants, let me tell you that, from my stories I may appear very uninhibited, but, it takes a lot for someone to get into my inner circle for me to be that way with them. So, for those who want to get to know me better, we'll keep the exchanges going, and let's see where it takes us. I have, so far, had one encounter with someone who wrote to me from here, and it was fun! So, men, keep at it! ;)
MUAH :*
Even more fabulous than the 1st chapter. You have left me wondering what is coming next. Do complete it soon.
erotica at its best. yes would love read more and waiting for the next chapter, I request you to write about how you met varun and started having an affair with him, how it all began.
Keep the stories Cumming. Hope to see more in the future. NB
Hi Nikita,
This story has been written so well, that you've got me wanting more. I keep checking every few days to see if the next part has been posted. Please Please Please continue the story, and do it soon!
Sooo sexy and natural! Reminds me of me you are feminine yet bossy and kinky!
More !