All Comments on 'Weekend Getaway'

Why are 'you' telling 'me' our shared history when 'I' should know all this just as well as 'you'? Do you know how stupid this makes the story seem to the reader? The spelling error in the very first sentence isn't a promising sign either.

I thought was very very romance and erotic story that I ever read so keep up your dood work thanks cfh

Nice story with a few small problems. A few misspelled words and a sense that there was no real emotion in the weekend. IMHO.